Writing Skills for EFL/ESL Students
Revising your own writing
Although
I am not a writing teacher at the university where I work, students often ask
me for some assistance for their compositions (term and research papers,
essays, and paragraphs). To give them some guidance to self-check their work,
it is customary to provide them with a copy of the questionnaire below. The
idea behind this is to make students aware of their writing, so they can develop themselves as writers and
self-editors.
This
questionnaire is the product of a joint effort of an ex-partner of mine,
Mauricio Parra, and me. We decided to create this set of questions to prompt some
writing skills among our students, to make them aware of the importance of
editing, and to provide them with a simple but direct guide to check their
writing.
Writing Skills
Revising your own writing
Check
your writing with these questions before you turn a paper in:
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Did you do some
prewriting activity such as brainstorming before you began to write your
composition?
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Will the first part of
your writing (thesis or topic sentence) catch your reader’s attention?
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3
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Did you also include a
title for your composition? Are you sure that you centered and capitalized it
correctly?
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Faulty
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Television
draws teens into a vast wasteland
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Better
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Television
Draws Teens into a Vast Wasteland
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Can you underline the topic sentence (TS) in each paragraph?
If you can’t, write a topic sentence to state the introduction to it. And be
sure you didn’t forget to indent
your paragraph.
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Does each sentence in the
development of the paragraph(s) refer to the central idea stated in the topic
sentence? Throw out irrelevant
sentences or move them to a better location.
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Did you avoid writing
sentences with the word it that
have people doing things?
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Faulty
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It
was decided that company policy be changed to allow employee selection of
personal leave days.
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Better
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The
personnel committee
decided to change company policy and allow employees to select their own
personal leave days.
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How about other pronouns?
Are pronoun references
accordingly?
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Faulty
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The
best job a person can get is in Tourism. There he or she can meet a lot of people, and they can make good money.
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Better
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The
best job a person can get is in tourism. There he
or she can meet a lot of people, and he or she can make good money.
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Does each sentence follow
the preceding one logically? Do you give your readers clues (words such as thus, therefore, first, because, but, etc.)
to help them follow your thoughts? If not, rearrange sentences and add transitions where necessary.
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Do sentences sound
complex because they’re long? Break
them up into simple sentences.
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Faulty
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The
cost of leaving for retired Americans living in Costa Rica is quite good for
them due to the exchange rate, which rarely goes up, and their retirement
plans in dollars, which are higher for Costa Rican living standards.
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Better
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The
cost of living for retired Americans living in Costa Rica is quite good for
them. This is so due to the exchange rate which rarely goes up. Another
reason is linked to their retirement plans in dollars, which are higher for
Costa Rican living standards.
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10
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Are you sure that you are
not using run-on sentences, -sentences which are just separated by commas?
Check punctuation for your TS and supporting sentences (sentences in the
paragraph development) as well.
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11
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Did you include a
concluding sentence (CS)? Did you use any signal expression like as a conclusion, to sum up, or to conclude to remind you of the CS.
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12
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Do you repeat the same words too often? Do you
use words you don’t need? Omit needless
words and search the thesaurus for useful synonyms.
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13
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Did you cut unnecessary
words, words that are not really necessary to include them?
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Faulty
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After
a time interval of one to two minutes, the tone usually stops.
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Better
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After
one to two minutes, the tone usually stops.
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14
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Did you substitute
descriptive verbs for vague verbs? If so, try to use more descriptive verbs
in your writing.
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Faulty
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He
went to the island.
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Better
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He
sailed to the island.
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15
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Read each sentence in the
paragraph aloud to recognize errors in
grammar, spelling of words you were not sure of, and punctuation. Correct these as well as typos.
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16
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Work with a partner and
provide him/her with a copy of these grading criteria along with your paper. Pay
attention to the aspects your partner will check in your composition to
improve it.
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Hopefully,
this kind of self-check post-writing task can make students much more aware of
what it really means to sit down and write a piece that contains no mistakes.
In doing so, and by working cooperatively with some other partner(s), students
can get to produce “great” pieces to be submitted to their writing instructors.
ETo fully develop and
comprehend this teaching issue, it’s advisable to research and expand these
areas:
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Tips
to improve one’s writing
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2
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The
writing process
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3
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How
to write thesis and topic sentences
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4
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Punctuation
for EFL/ESL learners
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5
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Indentation
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Professor
Jonathan Acuña-Solano
ELT
Instructor & Trainer based in Costa Rica
Freelance ELT Consultant four OUP in
Central America
For
further comments or suggestions, reach me at:
@jonacuso – Twitter
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the university are:
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